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After the Red Rain
by Barry Lyga, Peter Facinelli, and Rob DeFranco 

published on August 4th, 2015 by Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
young adult | dystopian | science-fiction | romance

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A postapocalyptic novel with a cinematic twist from New York Times bestseller Barry Lyga, actor Peter Facinelli, and producer Robert DeFranco.

On the ruined planet Earth, where 50 billion people are confined to megacities and resources are scarce, Deedra has been handed a bleak and mundane existence by the Magistrate she works so hard for. But one day she comes across a beautiful boy named Rose struggling to cross the river–a boy with a secretive past and special abilities, who is somehow able to find comfort and life from their dying planet.

But just as the two form a bond, it is quickly torn apart after the Magistrate’s son is murdered and Rose becomes the prime suspect. Little do Deedra and Rose know how much their relationship will affect the fate of everyone who lives on the planet.

Book Review

 

I was a little uncertain about this book from the start.  I’ve never read Barry Lyga before, and the dystopian angle didn’t sound particularly new.  However, it was so hyped at BEA that I decided to snag a copy from Netgalley.  Unfortunately, I should have considered my earlier reservations.  After the Red Rain is a mess of a book.  Yet it begins with such a thrilling, poignant moment:  a man in a strange factory of corpses, risking life and limb to save an infant from the grinding machines.  He gives her a strange, secret gift.  I was intrigued.  I was ready for something Matrix-like and dark.  

It’s quite apparent that the teenage girl we meet in the next chapter, Deedra, is that baby.  Her world is a dead world, a world so toxic that 50 billion people died off in a matter of years, and the 50 billion who remain live in starvation and squalor.  They also live in fear of the Red Rain, the quasi-mythical event that destroyed half their kind.  While skeptical that 50 billion people could reasonably survive on a scorched planet (we’re at 7 billion right now, if that helps), I enjoyed the sort of whimsical terror of Deedra’s world, a world divided into territories ruled by dangerous, omnipotent autocrats.  A world of hopelessness.

That’s where the book begins to unravel–pretty much instantly.  Deedra has a day off from her factory job and is out scrap-collecting with her friend–whose name I forgot, which should tell you about how important she is to this book–when she sees a beautiful girl across the river.  Only the girl is actually just a ridiculously beautiful boy who calls himself Rose.  He insinuates himself into Deedra’s community and joins her at the factory.  He believes in the Red Rain, even though Deedra and many others think it’s mere superstition.  He smells like heaven and wears a strange green coat.  His unsettling mix of innocence and perception terrify the higher-ups and put him on their radar.  When the territory leader’s son is murdered, Rose becomes their prime suspect.

And that’s sort of the book.  Rose and Deedra talk about the world and philosophical things.  Deedra falls in love with Rose because he’s oh-so-beautiful and perceptive and just a freaking ray of sunshine in a bleak world.  Deedra learns of Rose’s secrets and joins forces with an ambitious doctor, who believes that Rose’s abilities may save the world, to protect Rose from execution for a crime he didn’t commit.  You’d think this would all be fairly interesting, except that the writing is mediocre, the characters are flat, and the plot ambles along so slowly that I found myself skimming through nearly the whole last half.

In part, this book lost me with its absurdity.  I won’t spoil the secret of Rose’s abilities to you.  Let’s just say that it was the most ridiculous thing I’ve heard in a while.  I began to suspect the truth early on, then thought to myself, “No, of course not.  That’s just silly.”  And then I found out it was real, and there was just no way to suspend disbelief.  It rankled me in that way that things do when you can tell the authors are trying too hard to be clever.  And failing.  Badly.

Then, of course, there’s the freaking Red Rain.  They weren’t kidding about the “After” part.  Even though there are hints of something dangerous going on in the territory, even though the Red Rain is tossed around a few times, it quickly takes a side seat in favor of the Romeo and Juliet love story and the plot to save Rose.  I couldn’t get on board with the romance at all.  One, Deedra is annoying.  Two, Rose is exceptionally annoying.  They read as very naive (assuming you think Deedra has a personality at all) and their romance crescendos quickly.  It’s page after page of sappy dialogue and unbelievable action scenes, culminating in a saccharine ending that couldn’t have come too soon.

Somewhere near that ending, you learn what the Red Rain actually was.  It’s discussed for a couple of sentences before it becomes completely unimportant and is never mentioned again.  And so, what could have been a relatively interesting take on dystopia and the problem of human survival in an overpopulated world became a laughable science-fiction love story worthy of Bella and Edward.  Coincidence that Peter Facinelli was involved?

I need to go read some Cormac McCarthy to cleanse my palate.

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20 thoughts on “Review: After the Red Rain by Barry Lyga, Peter Facinelli, & Rob DeFranco

  1. So this book is disguised as science fiction, even though it is actually more of a romantic book? I had to double check if Facinelli here is THE Father Cullen. HE IS! Maybe that’s where they got the Edward/Bella storyline. I actually liked Barry Lyga’s “Jasper Dent” series.

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    1. That’s kind of what I got from it. I JUST WANTED TO KNOW WHAT THE FREAKING RED RAIN WAS. Ha, that fact only occurred to me when writing this review, but now I really do wonder. Some reviewers have expressed shock that Lyga was involved in this, so perhaps it’s not his usual style.

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  2. To be honest, I wasn’t intrigued about this book when I found about it. I didn’t even remember its existence until I saw this review. I guess I’m missing nothing. Great review!

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  3. What a pity, as it sounds so good but I don’t think I’ll be reading this as I think I’d get extremely annoyed with the characters and the romance and ugh no. Great review!

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  4. That’s disappointing. Very. I actually like Barry Lyga but I’m not sure I’ll be able to get passed some of the things you mentioned. Great review, btw!

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  5. Oh man, the premise for this one sounded amazing, but then it sounds like it circled around the romance with some unbelievable elements to it. I’m not keen on the sappiness and not mentioning the Red Rain again when the whole book sounds like it’s hinged on it! Lovely review C.J.

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